4.2 - Paper 1 Q5: Choosing a task and planning under time
Within 4.2, Paper 1 Question 5 asks you to choose between description from imagination and the opening of a story. You will learn how to test both routes quickly, select the one you can control and build a short plan that serves AO5 while preserving a separate AO6 check. This lesson ends with a bounded plan, not a full 40-mark response.
Understand the current choice
The current Question 5 offers two routes:
- description from imagination: a supplied picture may give you ideas, but you do not have to reproduce it exactly;
- the opening of a story: you establish the beginning of a larger narrative, rather than rushing to complete the whole plot.
Both routes have the same mark ceiling. The complete question is worth 40 marks, divided into 24 marks for AO5 and 16 marks for AO6. AQA advises about 45 minutes for Section B, including planning and checking, but that is not a compulsory minute-by-minute formula. Your own allocation should leave enough time to make a purposeful plan, write and check.
| Assessment objective | What the judgement concerns | What a plan can prepare |
|---|---|---|
| AO5: content and organisation | Clear, imaginative communication; relevance to the focus and task; suitable tone, style and register; coherent organisation | A central focus, viewpoint, purposeful selection and movement through ideas or events |
| AO6: technical accuracy | Controlled vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect; accurate spelling and punctuation | A brief reminder of a genuine risk to check, such as sentence boundaries, tense control or an uncertain spelling |
The mark scheme also gives typical features for descriptive and narrative writing.
Typical features
Flexible signs of work often seen at a level in the mark scheme, not ingredients that must all appear.
Counting imagery, senses, shifts, sentence types or punctuation marks cannot replace a relevant and coherent response.
Choose the route you can control
A useful choice is not simply the route you “like more”. Test whether you can see a precise focus and a controlled movement while staying inside the task. A brief trial of each route is enough; do not spend valuable planning time developing two complete plans.
Consider this practice pair:
A local arts centre is inviting creative pieces called After Hours. Choose one option.
Either describe an empty amusement park at dawn from your imagination.
Or write the opening of a story about somebody arriving at a place where they expected to find a crowd.
An expert first tests both possibilities. For the story opening, the first idea is merely “someone arrives and something bad happens”. The person, pressure and first meaningful change are still vague. For the description, however, the expert can already control one central impression: the park is silent but seems to be waiting to wake.
The expert therefore chooses description and makes this compact AO5 plan:
| Planning decision | Chosen content |
|---|---|
| Central viewpoint and impression | From the locked entrance, the park seems paused rather than abandoned. |
| First movement | A wide view of still rides against the paling sky. |
| Second movement | Attention narrows to rain on one chipped carousel horse and a loose ticket turning on the ground. |
| Final movement | Sunlight reaches the metal; the first motor cough changes silence into expectation. |
| Intended effect | Move from unease towards the suggestion that the place will soon return to life. |
The plan gives AO5 a selective focus and a sequence. The separate AO6 note is short and practical: keep the descriptive tense controlled; check sentence boundaries and the spelling of “carousel”. It does not demand a colon, dash and semicolon whether or not they suit the writing.
A weaker alternative would read: “all five senses; three similes; personification; short sentence; sudden kidnapping; twist ending.” This looks busy, but it has no stable viewpoint or coherent movement, drifts from description into a compressed plot and treats techniques as a shopping list. Those devices could be useful if they served a particular moment; their presence alone does not make the plan effective.
Guide a new choice
Now try the decision with support. For either route, identify one central focus, arrange a small number of connected stages and decide whether you can sustain them without forcing unrelated material. Description may move through attention, space, time or mood; a story opening may move through a character's situation, pressure and first consequential change. Neither route requires a fixed pattern.
Use these temporary planning headings if needed: route and focus → movement → reason for choosing. If you can make all three decisions securely, those headings will disappear in the next task.
Use this response rule after checking your answer: if your focus was vague, keep the first heading and make the person, place or impression precise. If your focus and movement were coherent, remove all three headings for the fresh transfer. The intellectual demand stays the same; only the prompt support changes.
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